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Dear Joe,
I'm sorry for what i've done
I shouldn't have searched for your address
For hours on end
Ravenously searching in the Yellow Book
Perhaos it was wrong
To watch from outside your window
And take pictures while you slept
And show up at your school
And your work
And your cousin's funeral
I just wanted to be there
Always there for you
I just wanted to express
My undying love
A love which sparked
When i dialed your number
410-555-3076
As it is tattooed on my thigh
But now, as i sit in my cell
Staring at the prison walls,
I realize i may have gone too far
When i burned my name into your lawn
And please believe me
When i tell you that i did it out of love
That i wanted to show you how much i cared
When i kidnapped your sister.
I'm sorry for what i've done
I shouldn't have searched for your address
For hours on end
Ravenously searching in the Yellow Book
Perhaos it was wrong
To watch from outside your window
And take pictures while you slept
And show up at your school
And your work
And your cousin's funeral
I just wanted to be there
Always there for you
I just wanted to express
My undying love
A love which sparked
When i dialed your number
410-555-3076
As it is tattooed on my thigh
But now, as i sit in my cell
Staring at the prison walls,
I realize i may have gone too far
When i burned my name into your lawn
And please believe me
When i tell you that i did it out of love
That i wanted to show you how much i cared
When i kidnapped your sister.
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continuation from the last poem...
...i don't think i'll be turning this one in.
all of these poems were written in another class, with my friend helping me, both of us laughing the whole time, and the other kid in the class just sitting there asking, "what's so funny?"
also: this is not an example of good poetry. that's why i have the "critiques discouraged" thing. i don't really care how poetic this is or isn't. it's just good for a cheap laugh. alright? ALRIGHT??? :0
...i don't think i'll be turning this one in.
all of these poems were written in another class, with my friend helping me, both of us laughing the whole time, and the other kid in the class just sitting there asking, "what's so funny?"
also: this is not an example of good poetry. that's why i have the "critiques discouraged" thing. i don't really care how poetic this is or isn't. it's just good for a cheap laugh. alright? ALRIGHT??? :0
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when i burned my name into your lawn..
hahahahahah
nice one 
hahahahahah
nice one